Hey everyone! Check out my latesst fully rendered clip I made using just Daz 4.6!

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Some of you commented liked my previous clip, so I thought I'd show off my latest. I hope you like!
Please feel free to post your suggestions and critiques on how I can make it better. =)

http://youtu.be/2qEkkPFjCUE

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2qEkkPFjCUE

Hermit Crab

Excellent work!

I love the vastness of setting and the way it shown from different angles. Great characters and lighting as well as sound. The continuity is also well done - no tedious moments. (I'm only speaking as an amateur in these things.) There are no clumsy motions - the whole thing flows well. I liked the integration of the floor-show with the rest.

The one feature I disliked was the way the teeth of the lady with blue lipstick showed in close-up dialogue. Somehow they were distracting (or too prominent?) But that isn't a fault - more a limitation of the model used?

Tramp Graphics

It's not bad so far but I do see some major collision issues with the skirts on the lead singer and her back-ups. The skirts are very rigid and when their legs or arms come in contact with them, they just pass through. Adding some collision between the characters and their clothes, and some movement to the skirts would help immensely.

WendyLuvsCatz

I am very impressed you rendered it it Daz studio
and yes lots going on, lots of work involved

that said DS4.6 does indeed have the smoothing modifier and you should use it
a geometry shell works even better with it.
it would add polish to what is otherwise a very professional looking animation marred by the one little thing.
my software choices do not so pokethrough a constant thorn in the side I must manually fix or avoid in outfit choices.

NoName99

That was awesome!

I love the atmosphere you created. Really well done.