Promo Image Help

PineCliff

Hiya Everyone

After a redesign to incorporate Genesis 9 I am planning to resubmit a high school stage product to Daz. The main part of this are the lighting controls and hand painted pantomime set pieces, and I try to show these off in the renders I have made. So I am asking the community to steer me in the right direction with critique and guidance on the images I plan to send (Seen attatched).

 

Any advice is greatly appreciated.